That All-Important Hook

This past November, I participated in the NovNov challenge, which took over from NaNoWriMo.  Although I’ve played around with doing NaNoWriMo a couple of times, I never officially joined, so this was my first time signing up.  I would have gotten the 50k words in if I hadn’t had major computer and internet issues—I could only write by hand for a week! 😒 But what finally made it easy to write 1,667 plus words a day was joining the online writing sprints offered by the NovNov sponsor, and discovering that they’re the best thing since sliced bread.

Actually, they’re much, much better.  In fact, it’s probably not an exaggeration to say that discovering virtual writing sprints may be one of the best things that’s happened to me in years.  I just wish I’d found something like them a long time ago; if I had, I’d probably have more than a dozen novels written by now—and I’m not joking.

Happily, the NovNov sponsor (a UK company that makes a program for writers called ProWritingAid) has continued to run sprints as part of the numerous activities they’re offering in conjunction with a writing contest.  One of their videos is a ‘bootcamp course’ on writing.  I was impressed with the way the course succinctly covers a lot of important material.  While probably eighty to ninety percent of the points it addresses are things I already do—often unconsciously—likely because I’m an experienced writer, it made an excellent and encouraging review.  I would particularly recommend it for young writers (or anyone relatively new to the craft, regardless of age).

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Write-a-thon 2025 Week Two

Although this is kind of ‘Week 1’ of the Write-a-thon for me, I did work on the novel during that first week before I’d signed up; those days just weren’t officially part of the six-week quest.  I’ve also clicked on the ‘I wrote today’ button too late in the evening several times, so my counter of ‘days written’ is already off (but I suppose it’s the spirit of it that counts!).

The official accomplishment this week is completing one chapter.  It feels fairly significant—and is something of a relief—since it was a chapter I’ve been stuck on for ages (due to wrestling with how to incorporate some of the old material I want to use with the new stuff I’m drafting, and figuring out the best way to make the pieces fit together).

The second excerpt I’ve added to my Write-a-thon page is from this new chapter.  Being first draft material, it’s probably a bit rough, but it’s a passage I was rather tickled with—and it seemed an appropriate place to share it, since it’s about the craft of writing. 🙂

Clarion West Write-a-thon 2020

The Clarion West Write-a-thon runs in conjunction with the six-week long writer’s workshop in Seattle each summer, and although this year the workshop itself has been postponed, like everything else, the Write-a-thon is still on for the same dates, June 21 to July 31.  Kudos to the Clarion West folks for doing their best to help writers feel connected, and inspired to keep working, by offering a number of online events and courses in lieu of the regular summer activities.

Here’s the link to my page for the Write-a-thon: Lara Campbell McGehee – Clarion West.  For now I haven’t changed it from last year’s, but I may add some updates as I go along.  As always, any donations are much appreciated.

Clarion West Write-a-thon 2019

This year’s Write-a-thon runs from June 23rd to August 3rd.  My page is here. For now I’m leaving my ‘goals’ section the same as last year, though I think it might help if I picked a specific project or two to complete by the end of the six weeks.  I was a bit surprised at how much I accomplished in a short period when I was scrambling to revise a short story in time to meet a submission deadline last month — being under that kind of pressure can certainly be motivating!

Clarion West Write-a-thon 2018

Once again I’m looking forward to participating in the Clarion West Write-a-thon. As always, any support or encouragement is much appreciated. 🙂 My page on the Write-a-thon site can be found here.

My info on the site is the same as last year’s, as the only brand new writing project I’ve tackled since then is a novelette (a very long short story) that’s currently sitting in the cool-down phase before I go back to do another draft. So for the six weeks of the Write-a-thon, I’ll be plugging away at the same things that are still in the pipeline, and again focusing on trying to keep up a regular schedule with a minimum of two hours of writing time each day.

Of Elves and Giants

The first time I saw Ursula K. Le Guin give a reading, I was surprised that she was a more petite woman than I’d imagined, and touched to discover that her small frame and way of moving reminded me quite a bit of my mother. It always seemed to me that my mother’s fine-boned structure, combined with a special poise and elegance, contributed to giving her a fey quality. Before seeing Le Guin in person that day, I’d only seen a few black and white photos of her face. It wasn’t that I expected her to be a particularly tall or robust woman, but I certainly hadn’t anticipated that she would share that elven quality my mother had. Upon reflection, it seemed highly appropriate for someone capable of such powerful magic with words.

One descriptor that’s appeared often in the many articles written about Le Guin this week is ‘giant’, with her being referred to as ‘a literary giant’ or a ‘giant of science fiction’. Thinking about this led to a realization I wrote about in an email to a dear writer friend and fellow Le Guin fan, and I wanted to share part of it here:

Some people with brilliant minds and a powerful presence — full of a great, sparkling mental energy — just seem like they should be immortal, and a world without her in it feels like a world left with a huge empty space. It dawned on me yesterday that when someone who appears — on the outside — in the form of a small elderly woman can leave behind such a gigantic hole, it’s exactly what Jem thinks about his foster mother, Enkara, near the beginning of White Sky: ” . . . Enkara, who was one of the oldest of the midwives, was also one of the smallest women in that house, and she didn’t look strong. But Jem knew that in truth she was larger than the others. On the inside, where it really counted, she was bigger than all the rest of them put together.”

A Thousand Words

It’s the task of the writer — and the special gift of the writer — to find words for the things that are hardest to put into words.  While the old adage is ‘a picture paints a thousand words’, the challenge we relish is attempting to do the opposite: using words to paint pictures in vivid, real-life detail, and, even more challenging, to capture the subtlest nuances of emotion.  But that doesn’t mean it isn’t very difficult at times.  Perhaps in some ways it’s hardest of all for a writer, who knows the immense importance of finding exactly the right words at the right moment.

So today I share a picture to convey those thousand words, through some little friends of mine — collectively known as ‘the writer doggies’ — who sit on my desk and keep me company while I write (a good thing to have for such a solitary activity).  They’re always good at being quiet, but today there seems a deep sadness in the quiet camaraderie they share.

 

Clarion West Write-a-thon 2017

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Write-a-thon time has come around once again, and as usual I’m itching to work on something new but also have oodles of edits that need to get done. So this summer’s goal will be to reestablish a writing routine where I spend at least two hours a day doing some kind of writing, whether it’s editing or drafting, rather than tying myself to one particular project. I’m hoping that will result in making progress on final edits for one novel, doing both some drafting and editing of old material for another, and polishing up one short story to start sending out on submission.

One of the things that’s fun about joining the Write-a-thon is seeing your name on a list shared by so many interesting writers, including some who are quite successful. Naturally there are many who are graduates of the Clarion West workshop, which is certainly a noteworthy accomplishment in itself. I’ve also found that when I peruse the profiles there are plenty of authors with impressive publication credentials — such as having short fiction published in some of the most hard-to-get-into speculative fiction markets — even if their names may not yet be familiar to me. And sometimes the most impressive part of a profile is a beautifully written excerpt. So it’s a great place to find the names of new writers to check out.

And speaking of author’s names, just by chance my name ended up directly above Vonda N. McIntyre’s on the Write-a-thon page this year, and I can’t help getting a bit of a ‘fan-girl’ kick out of that, since she’s definitely high on my list of all-time favorite authors. 😀 She’s also a regular participant in the Write-a-thon — I think she’s done it every year since I started — and it’s exciting that for some time now she’s been making references to a big novel in progress that she’s been working on; now that’s something to look forward to! 🙂

It’s Write-a-thon Time

This is my fourth year of participating in the Clarion West Write-a-thon. (It also marks the fourth anniversary of this website, since being able to post weekly updates, as well as having a complete professional profile for the Write-a-thon, was an added incentive for setting up my own author site.) As mentioned in the goals section of my Write-a-thon page, I would have preferred to be drafting something new during the next six weeks, since it’s easier to get a real sense of accomplishment when you can count words or chapters written, but finishing the final edits for She-Wolf has to be my priority this summer.

I’ve often talked about finding the editing phase very enjoyable (and even downright addictive!), especially the fine tweaking and polishing that goes into getting the language just right. But one difficulty with this stage of the writing process (for me, in any case) is that it can be very hard to accurately estimate how long those kinds of edits will take. When you carefully work through a chapter and think you’re happy with it, only to spot a number of additional things you want to change when you come back to it a week later, it makes it hard to set deadlines.

No doubt part of that is due to being afflicted with chronic perfectionism, but I can’t discount the fact that being in a slightly different frame of mind when you pick something up can help you to see it in a different light. For instance, I’ve found that looking at a manuscript not only in print, but in actual book form, helps even more with shifting fully into ‘reader mode’.

Some of the authors who like to share their progress on my favorite writers’ forum seem to have little trouble with both predicting how long the final edits of a project will take, and moving quite quickly and systematically through the process. However, it’s usually apparent that the editing they’re talking about involves making everything clear and error free, not slaving over the nuances of the language.

I saw an interview with David Joy, the author of Where all Light Tends to Go, in which he talked about how many hours he’d spent on the very end of that book — I think just the last page or two — because the ending was so crucial to the impact of the entire novel. It was refreshing to hear that, but I don’t think it’s uncommon for writers of literary fiction to put that kind of work into sculpting every line in one passage, just as a poet would do, since in literary prose both the meaning (sometimes multiple layers of meaning) and the sound and rhythm of the language are of paramount importance.

My sister, who’s a poet and playwright, was just telling me how long she’s been working on one little poem in which she’s experimenting with using a strict form. (I think all poets should try that now and then, both to challenge themselves and to explore the rich culture of their art.) I can spend an outrageous amount of time playing with query letters — sometimes repeatedly switching words or parts of lines back and forth as I keep changing my mind about which order sounds better — and I also find doing critiques quite time consuming, because it’s so important to be thorough enough to ensure that the critique is both truly constructive and encouraging. Last week I spent an entire day writing an email to a fellow author to give her feedback on her book. And while I’m sure we’d all like others to think we’re so clever and articulate that we can just toss out well-crafted, thoughtful critiques — off the tops of our heads, as it were — in my experience that simply isn’t realistic.

The principle behind the often-repeated quote ‘I would have written you a shorter letter if I had more time’ certainly comes into play with things like poems, queries, critiques, and anything else that’s meant to be concise; when you can only use a limited number of words, it becomes all the more important to choose the right ones. (This is also one reason that writing short stories can be good for improving a novelist’s skills.) But whether the work in question is short or long, doing a truly good job of editing takes time.

And in the end I feel the same way about novels as I do about short stories: that the Holy Grail would be to have every paragraph read like an exquisite poem, and although that may be impossible to achieve, there’s no reason not to strive toward that ideal. The obvious difficulty is finding the right balance between aspiring to near perfection and completing a story in a realistic time frame. Consequently, I find that when it comes to fitting an editing project into six weeks, the most reasonable goal is to aim for getting in a number of productive hours each week.

Spreading the Word about the ‘Worlds of Ursula K. Le Guin’ Documentary and Kickstarter Campaign

I recently learned about this feature documentary about Ursula K. Le Guin and the fundraiser that the filmmaker, Arwen Curry, is currently running through Kickstarter. It looks like a wonderful project, and Arwen Curry has been filming and working closely with Le Guin for a number of years; the film is scheduled to come out in 2017.  The project has been awarded a grant from the National Endowment for the Humanities, but to get the funds from the grant released, the producers have to raise the balance of their budget, which is $200,000.  While they set their initial Kickstarter goal for $80,000, they’ve already doubled that, and with two more weeks to go, it looks like there’s a good chance they’ll get the full amount and then be able to focus entirely on finishing the film — I’ve got my fingers crossed that they’ll make it!

As anyone who knows me (or who’s read much on this site) is well aware, Le Guin is both my favorite author and my greatest inspiration as a writer. It may seem that I go on about her a bit much, but it’s hard to put into words the significance of the epiphany I had when I first discovered her work.  As I mention in my bio here, it was because of her that I learned that there was such a thing as social science fiction, and realized that all these story ideas I had running around in my head fit perfectly into that subgenre.  (And one could argue that much of my fantasy is essentially social SF with a fantasy-type setting and a few other elements that give it that fantasy feel instead.)

Because Le Guin writes both SF and fantasy and a wide variety of other things — including poems, essays, plays, contemporary fiction, and children’s picture books — she also provided an example of the kind of writer I want to be, since I’m interested in writing many things and wouldn’t want to be pigeon-holed into any category.  And as soon as I was old enough to fully appreciate the brilliance of her style, it also contributed to inspiring me to strive toward that level of mastery as a writer.

It’s intriguing how a person you’ve never even met can have as much of an impact on you as, say, a favorite teacher, or even a grandparent. When you read someone’s words (and I love reading Le Guin’s essays almost as much as reading her fiction) and find that those words feel familiar yet also teach you new things that relate to your own ideas and goals, it’s a great deal like having a mentor who plays an active role in your life.  It was actually a bit unsettling when I first read Le Guin’s work, because I discovered that some of the elements, such as the settings, the concepts involved, and the type of storylines, made her stories seem remarkably similar to my own.

For instance, much of Planet of Exile and parts of Tombs of Atuan gave me the odd feeling that here was something I could have written in another life, or perhaps in a parallel universe where I was a slightly different version of myself.  But I should also clarify that I’m referring to the content and ‘flavor’ of those stories — not, alas, that I’m suggesting that there was a marked similarity in the writing!  (I only wish I could say that my style was similar to hers when I was a young teenager!) 😉

Funnily enough, much more recently I’ve had the experience of something feeling familiar in the opposite way.  I haven’t read Patrick Rothfuss’s books (I’m afraid I always have a big backlog of books I want to read, just as I have a backlog of stories to write!), but on several occasions I’ve picked one up and read a passage or two.  And each time I’ve come away with the feeling that there are uncanny similarities in our styles — rather than getting the ‘this sounds like something I would write about’ feeling I’ve had with Le Guin’s stories, I found myself thinking ‘boy, that sounds like the kind of phrasing and/or descriptive details I would use’.  It isn’t that anything about the content feels particularly familiar, only the style, and from looking at Rothfuss’s website and some interviews, we don’t appear to have any influences in common — other than Tolkien, which is practically a given when it comes to writers of fantasy.  (But perhaps that’s not insignificant; sadly, I’ve encountered some young fantasy writers online who admit to strongly disliking Tolkien’s style.) 😕

But I also thought of Rothfuss just now because one thing I really admire about him relates to fundraisers; he founded a charity called Wordbuilders that raises money for projects like Heifer International, which I think is fantastic.  Whenever an artist has had enough success to give them some visibility, that visibility may be helpful in raising awareness of a good cause, so it gives me the warm fuzzies to see an author putting so much of their energy into charity work, and Mr. Rothfuss certainly deserves kudos for all he does in that arena.

Le Guin is also someone who’s done countless wonderful things that go well beyond her own writing. She’s always been a vocal supporter of authors and artistic freedom, as well as setting a great example for being open-minded and passionate about the positive potential in all us, artists and non-artists alike.  I confess it’s kind of wild for me to read some of the comments on the Kickstarter page and on Facebook about how she’s inspired and moved other people.  In spite of her stature as an author, the truth is that if I don’t count people I’ve come across on websites that have to do with writing or reading, in ‘real life’ I’ve met no more than half a dozen individuals who knew her name and had perhaps read one of her books.

So in many ways it’s always felt as if my zeal for Le Guin as a writer is a personal thing that’s part of my identity alone, although of course I’ve always known — on a logical level — that it was impossible that I was her only devotee!  It’s always nice to meet fellow fans who share a common interest, but being an author whose own work has been influenced by hers also means that it’s important for me to learn more about her other readers and find ways to connect with them.  One of the obvious answers to the question of who the audience is for my own books is ‘Le Guin fans’; I’m sure most people would identify In the Shadow of the She-Wolf as the same type of literary social science fiction as Le Guin’s SF novels.  (Hey, for that reason alone it’s exciting to see confirmation that the folks who read those books really do exist!)😀

In all seriousness, it’s great to see the depth of support for this documentary and to know there are many of us who are looking forward to it, and I’d like to encourage anyone reading this to contribute to funding the project if you’re able to (and haven’t done so already), and also to pass this along to anyone else you know who might be interested.  Here’s the link to the Kickstarter campaign again.